Hannah

Hey. This started in a completely fulfilling, original, engaging way. This is the part of your poem that I can get behind and work with: Awkwardly polite Social dynamite Never ...

Oh! Another Purple Moment! I am happy this one is much more accessible and concrete. I love especially the juxtaposition between the fantasy-world epicness of the "wooden gate" and the ...

So vague! So vague! It's one thing to give a vague push in a direction and let the reader puzzle it out for themselves, and it's another thing to be ...

Did you discover something while you were writing this poem? Did you come to an end point that felt for you like you fulfilled something for yourself? I feel like ...

Hey, Coral. You should message me if you want to, 'cause I don't know if you actually want to, but if you do you should~ Now, I love that you ...

on your wedding day, though it's a good thing my uniforms are white There's not a lot I want to change about this, Audy. You're my style, or at least ...

It totally made perfect sense. It was absolutely clear to me what was going on here from the beginning, but I think you circumvented it too much to really get ...

Here are some things as I fly through the first time: looked like a forest from the classroom amazon books. Reading this through as it is makes me think the ...

Hahaha, oh my gosh! What a mean mom. Like she just tricked her daughter into eating another apple? When her daughter probably trusted her 'cause they grew up together? I ...

Yup, it's a big problem that your poem revolves around a questionable usage of the word "sappy". Sappy, to me, usually seems pretty happy. Like, people who are being sappy ...

I know that feel! I know that feel! Ugh! Step moms. D: But, wow, after reading your replies to other reviews, I don't feel like I really want to post ...

Quick impressions on the first read through: maybe it wasn't his very best time, clearly. How can it be "maybe" and "clearly" at the same time? He let himself enter ...

This is obviously very close to you, so I wonder what you want to get out of posting it on a forums for reviews. What is your direction with this ...

Hey there~ It would be cool if you edited this into formatting, but the rhyme makes it easy to see where I think you'd have put linebreaks anyway, so I ...

Magpie, this is super and brilliantly gorgeous for the most part, but there are two sets of lines that I just want to cast out altogether. You bring texture, motion, ...