Hannah

lovely. very tight, very precise, very thought out. you know what you wanted to do and you did it, but the one thing that really bothers me is the end. ...

Hey there! The main point I want to focus on in this critique is that the old, tried and true essay method of saying, I did this, look: "quote quote ...

there are a lot of people who have written about the torture of mother earth, and there are a lot of people who should be, as we have real problems ...

Ahh, heartbreaking. The intention, the set up, the base for a really powerful piece is all here, but it needs a little more tweaking before I'd call it solid. And ...

Woooooooow~ Color me impressed, this was very well executed, clear, and poignant. The first two stanzas leave nothing to be desired. I can't. I am so glad you wrote them, ...

this is the right way to do rhyming. i am so happy to see this good example, because by posting this, you've given younger writers a beacon to follow. this ...

Nice. This was honest, powerful, and carried itself through to the end in a logical pattern. There are a few things that need to be changed, I think, though, and ...

let's see, a quick tense fix: Not one day have you ever weaken. ^ when you use have, you have to use weakened: have weakened now, on to the piece ...

now now, come on. is this masquerader confident or not confident about his/her abilities? the middle stanza seems strong and cold, but the first and second two seem week, like ...

Hey there. At first, I thought this poem was about something like "good news" or a sweet motto or something like that, but suddenly yer talking about rumors? This needs ...

First impression: WAY TOO MANY PEOPLE. that's probably not a problem in a movie as we'd have faces to tell them apart, but the names are all so non-descript that ...

Woohoo~ So it was cool to read a piece that seemed to have been written with a lot of authority about how the transfer of power happens. I liked the ...

mmmm, nice formatting of the quote, but i guess i don't understand. why use a quote you directly disagree with and ONLY say you disagree with it? there are so ...

okay! i'll bite! this is a riddle. the thing about a riddle is, though, is that it has to be possible, with time, for the guesser to be confident about ...

The first thing I want to say is that I'm confused between the two sections of this story. It seemed in the first part that she was already married with ...