Hattable

Also, you can use [quote] [/quote] to make your reviews easier to read. You just take a bit of the novel you wanna talk about or correct and put it ...

Thanks for the review, but you should really learn how to use commas... "Whether it be (,) by some incredibly accident" wouldn't be the right place to use a comma, ...

Thanks for the review. "She" shouldn't be capitalized as it's part of a dialogue tag, and I don't think there necessarily has to be a comma instead of period after ...

Pepe?

Deadpan winked? o.O I didn't know I made him do that. ;-; I must fix dis.

XD

*Jason likes to take credit for things. He says they saved Jasmine, but really Jasmine saved them

*Jason likes to take credit for things. He says they saved Jasmine, but really Jasmine saved them

Jesus Christ, another reviewer who didn't read the previous chapters. -_- SO, Jasmine wasn't kidnapped by any space pirates or anything. She crash landed on their moon and was masquerading ...

*not sure what else you'd call a light switch or a wall, but okay* I'm sort of experimenting with my writing style in this novel, and being repetitive/over-using words is ...

... i didn't read it

Is this for @fortis? o:

GODDAMMIT I THOUGHT I WAS USING 'LIED' AND 'LAID' CORRECTLY. Anyway, the whole redundant, repetitive, and whatever else way of writing is kind of intentional in this story. I have ...

An astronaut leaving earff? Sure. Astronauts are free reign!

'The Man Who Left' sounds a bit duller to me. 'The Man Who Leaves' kinda sounds like he leaves a lot %u2014 not just once. :p I like the sense ...