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  • Other Re: Robotic

    Wow. This is very cool . . . and creepy. o.o The lack of punctuation is powerful and definitely captures the "robotic" feeling, but it's a little hard to read ...

    Dec 4, 2009
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A

    Hai. :) Still no reviews, huh? I've never watched Fruits Basket (I've heard of it though), so I'm not sure how qualified I am to review this, but I didn't ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 2012 End of the world?

    The world could possibly end in 2012, like Hippie said, but the predictions would be just a coincidence. Like the above commenters said, the end of the world has been ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Prime Death

    Hi there! I love animal stories, and this was sweet and sad. The main thing is is that you have a lot of grammar mistakes. Here's an overview (the red ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Shadow Kissed pt.7

    Hi! You really need to post more at time, so people have more to review. Angry, something else she could feel. Without a heart, would she be able to feel ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Snarl

    Nov 30, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Memoirs of Ali - Chapter 4

    Memoirs of Ali Chapter Four Days passed and turned into weeks. I took up residence quite near Toby's clump of flowers, hidden between the logs of a pile of wood. ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You ... [2]

    o.o How could you suggest that. TUBM is six feet tall.

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Werewolf

    Nov 29, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

    *pokes* I've never used one of these little threads. Let's see if it works . . . I just need a review on this one chapter. ^^

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: This Week on YWS: 11/21/2009

    I third Aquamarine. And I fourth her. :D

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Dark

    Nov 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Shadow Kissed pt.5

    It's me again! She went in a fury, This should be "into." She crumpled up her invisibility cloak, grew out her fangs and claws, which she had been filing down ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Shadow Kissed pt.4

    Hey! No reviews, huh? Well, I'm here to fix that. ^^ This is a very interesting concept you have here. I've always loved animal stories, and so I think the ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stolen Hearts.

    Hello there! So, this poem is sweet, but there are a few things: The Heart Starts Of Love. You need a "with" instead of "of" here. It To Be Stolen ...

    Nov 26, 2009


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