Hawkie

Hi! I like your poem - but it's very short! I think you could expand on it a little more. The hatchling leaps This is my favorite line. However, young ...

Hello! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. You have a very interesting concept here, and your characters seem interesting as well. However, your writing leaves a lot of ...

Wow. This is very cool . . . and creepy. o.o The lack of punctuation is powerful and definitely captures the "robotic" feeling, but it's a little hard to read ...

Hai. :) Still no reviews, huh? I've never watched Fruits Basket (I've heard of it though), so I'm not sure how qualified I am to review this, but I didn't ...

Hi there! I love animal stories, and this was sweet and sad. The main thing is is that you have a lot of grammar mistakes. Here's an overview (the red ...

Hi! You really need to post more at time, so people have more to review. Angry, something else she could feel. Without a heart, would she be able to feel ...

It's me again! She went in a fury, This should be "into." She crumpled up her invisibility cloak, grew out her fangs and claws, which she had been filing down ...

Hey! No reviews, huh? Well, I'm here to fix that. ^^ This is a very interesting concept you have here. I've always loved animal stories, and so I think the ...

Hello there! So, this poem is sweet, but there are a few things: The Heart Starts Of Love. You need a "with" instead of "of" here. It To Be Stolen ...

Whoa. That was . . . pretty intense. And your concept is interesting! "Papillion" is an original name for a planet, especially since it means "butterfly," but you've got me ...

Hello! Psst, don't tell, but normally I don't review poetry. I think I can handle this, though. Soaring, gliding, floating Twirling, rotating, whirling Fleeting, rushing, speeding In a recent poem ...

:( That was so sad, Aqua. And beautiful. I don't really have a whole lot to say. You wouldn’t kill it, you told me that it looked to intelligent. I ...

Hi there! I thought your story was interesting, but it didn't get me excited or enthralled like some stories do. You have a lot of grammar mistakes throughout. I don't ...

Thorn! Hai there. ^^ So, this was really cool. A good read. Unlike Jabs, I like short, snappy stories without too much meat. xD Very long ago, in a faraway ...

Heeyyy there! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today! So, guess what? Wolves are my favorite animal, so I was kind of biased to like this piece, but oh ...