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Re: 16 and realising...
This is a really nice piece, and a lot of it is true, but don't grow up to fast. Being 16 is a time to have fun, yes think about ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: A Mother's Tears
This was deep, and it tells the story of thousands of women, this was a powerful image that you planted. I'm personally not a mother, but I've been around enough ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Haunted Topiary
It sounded good for a mystery, but, and I hate to say this mate but it was rushed and it lacked a whole lot of detail, I feel that you ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Straw into Gold
This was really nice, it reminds me of Rumpelstiltskin. Then again I'm sure that's what you were getting at in the first place, I love the fairy tale romance and ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Realization
This is really deep stuff. I remember three years ago I felt the same way with my life. Just remember at the very end of a dark path is light ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Assassins Creed - A glitch in the 21st century
Like any other fan girl I'm a sucker for Assassin's Creeds Ezio Auditore. It's a great plot to be sure, some grammatical errors here and there, but I can over ...
Aug 6, 2011