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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: THe Hunter is Hunted

    You spelled pointed wrong, and you need to use a semicolon instead of a comma: "You're going to have to do a better job, I've had a gun pionted at ...

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Virus - 1

    While I was reading this I noticed you're having a little trouble using your punctuation correctly. For example: when you use semicolons, you use them like a comma. That day ...

    Sep 6, 2009


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes