Heidigirl666

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All my stories are in a British setting, I'm British. :wink: Thanks for the review, anyway. :)

Leant is a word. It's British English. Like 'learnt'. :D I know 'and' is used to much in the beginning. Someone already pointed that out, KJ. :wink: I know. I'm ...

was supposed to be funny? :? Only just noticed it was in Fanfiction and says comedy... :? Is there supposed to be cheesy narration? :? Still don't like it anyway...

Are you trying to be funny? :shock: All good points though. I do have a habit of repeating things. :D And I could think of another word. I like saying ...

:cry: You made me cry... :D No, not really. Yes, I do have a habit of letting my sentences run away with me sometimes. :roll: Where does it need a ...

Thanks for the tips and positive comments. GryphonFledgling, I kind of know what you mean about not being able to tell between his words and the narration, but it's actually ...