HellLightning

Wow, this is a really nice poem, and a nice way to describe the wedding ceremony. :D I really like it how you call the priest a "fat fella", it's ...

hmmmm I'm not a psychiatrist, so I can't give a professional feedback, but I do have some things to say: 1. You should tell people about your problem. Not everyone, ...

Oh my God, this poem totally reminds me of myself during one particular part of my past. Very nicely written. I like the fact that it's very clear and understandable, ...

Oh, this is a really sad poem. You say you want us to focus on the ending in the review, because you dislike it. Hmmmmmmm, what can I say about ...

This is really great, Aria! You should really finish it and publish it as a novel.