HenPen

She walked a path. Paved. With all that is luminary. Pushing her child. A path of broken stars and glowing debris of shattered ships, A You missed out a space ...

Okay so I'm not going to point out all the grammatical errors or anything, because everyone else has done it so it'd be a bit pointless.. I agree I am ...

A couple of spelling errors, but apart from that, it's really good! I really like it, it's very interesting, I particuarly like this bit! I am because of my experiences ...

It's good, nice idea, but you have forgotten some grammar and to use only one "!" without a space after the words. Back to home !!! Back to home! But ...

That was really good! It really describes how it is to feel hopeless and depressed! Yeah, so really good and keep writing, I love it! Walking on an open road ...

I agree with TheBlondie... It was really good, it ended quite suddenly though, not much description of "then end" although that might be a good thing as well I guess, ...

I don't know if it's right or not but I got the feeling you're writing about a pen? And someone enjoying being creative/writing? I thought it was good, but could ...

This was really really amazing, and now I'm addicted to all of your writing! I could see the characters in my mind. And I'm sorry ignored your warning! :P So ...

I thought it was really good, very simplistic and I liked the idea, however, I do think it ended a bit awkwardly and sudden, like you said. So maybe a ...

It's really nice, it really conveys a lot of emotion and feelings. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes or anything :D Anyway, I really love it, it pinpoints almost exactly ...

I thought it was good, I'm sure lots of people could relate that to lots of relationships and yes, really describes how I feel with fairytales! I didn't see any ...

Heya :) That was so cute, it gave me a really nice warm feeling! Anyway, You're probably aware by now, as everyone else has said it but, yes there are ...