HereBeMonsters

Thanks for the review, ZLYF! :) Getting personality across seems to be one of my major problems... need to work on that.

Thanks for the review! :D Just so I know, which bits did you find a bit cliched, so I can change them?

Thank you very much, captaindomdude. I'm glad at least one person's reading it! :D

Thanks for the review Smylin :D! I get a lot of what you're saying, with the slightly confusing family and bits of the background plot that aren't explained yet. For ...

I thought it was good, but very, very brief. I don't see anything wrong from a grammatical or spelling perspective. It's just very hard to judge this work based on ...

Hi everybody and thanks for all of your comments. Concerning the matter of it being a bit too jarring, with the characters having little or no explanation or characterisation, there ...