Hereticteen

nah... I like it. Unreviewable.

The "inspiration" for this poem is completely real life. This is one of my completely personal stories and I don't feel the need to polish them. What are you thinking ...

thanks for pointing out the typo. believe it or not I actually proofread this. I guess I missed that.

However, I will say... I am not proud of this poem. I'm not sure why I published it.

Thank you for taking the time to read this poem, and thank you for all of your compliments. YES, I am very comma-heavy... always have been. I write the way ...

I'm so sorry, but I have something to say. I understand how this works, so I will rant here. And if you wish to read my writings, simply let me ...

Interesting. Thank you for correcting me. I'm sure of got all of my info mixed up in my head.

I posted another poem, it's called Fountain of Sand, go check it out!

This is some incredible encouragement. Thank you very much for motivating me to write more. I've already got a few projects finished that I should probably post.

I'm going to be super honest, this poem doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. Is it someone talking to themself? I do enjoy the pretty voice detail ...

This poem is amazing. As someone that has experienced severe depression, I can honestly say that this might be the best poem i've ever seen written to address depression. You ...