HessicaJolt

I love this poem! I think its because I can relate to it so much, and even though it doesn't rhyme constantly it flows PERFECTLY. I have nothing to critique ...

This definitely looks like it came from the heart. I absolutely love it. Its beautiful, even though short. Great job!

Was ticked when I wrote this. But I wrote it very quickly. I would love critique

Great job! Very, very emotional, and you pointed out your feelings very well. The only thing that I noticed was this ;D but it only makes my veins bleed faster, ...

I like how everyone was reeled in cleverly with the title. Great job! It ran very smoothly, so it was nicely written. I liked it very much, and I have ...

Great job! I didn't seen anything that you could fix other than putting commas and semi-colons and all that chiz that no one actually likes doing ;) Great job! Loved ...

I read it very quickly at first, and then went to critique it. I didn't quite get its meaning, but after reading it a second time, It came to me. ...

I've already let go of your hand, yet you still hold on; You think I'm there beneath you, but the truth is that I'm gone. With the wind I have ...

I think you will get farther with this story if you explain more. I read in one of the comments that you said that this is something your going through, ...

This is a pretty good poem, and it rolls off my tongue smoothly, but I must say some things just didn't make any sense. It left me a little confused. ...

I imagined someone reading this with a very assertive and angry tone. It made me laugh. I love it when people can capture their feelings while making it creative. It ...

I like this. It has such an innocence behind it that leaves me smiling! The last poem put me in a dark mood, and this one completely lifted my spirit. ...

Extremely sad, but beautifully written. I love the imagery, and it felt as if I could see the person and the scenario. Beautiful, in a depressing way.

I sat on the petal of the rose, and stared out at the world beyond me. I wasn't supposed to be here, I knew that. I should have flew right ...

You mean well, but your making it worse. Crushing me with sympathy, is turning this pain into a curse. My heart yearns, for a simple no. Don't hang me up ...