Hiadel

Great short. I loved how you refereed to Voldemort as "Voldie".

I updated it to my current 4th draft. Thanks for the reviews so far, I'm happy with how this piece is working out.

Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks so much for the amazing feedback! I really appreciate it all so far!

Ok, eddited grammer mistakes aside, what did u guys think of the general plot/buildup/ending?

Thanks for all the comments. I really appreciate it!

When I was writing this piece I intentionally went out on a limb and tried to toy with people's views of romance and how things in this arena work out. ...

I've never read any of the twilight saga (and I don't plan on reading it in the future.). Can a man honestly write a story involving a werewolf without it ...

Yeah thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it!

Cool. If you post other stuff up, pm me please!

I liked that a lot! Very interesting plot development. PM me when you finish put more stuff on it up! Other than that, keep it up :D

Thank you ever so much for the imput and what you all said. Thanks!

Thanks so much! All that advice really helps and I really appreciate it!

Hiadel, I can't quite figure out whether your constant use of narrative summary is deliberate or accidental. So I have a question for you - Is there a reason why ...

Thank you for all of the helpful pointers!