Hibiscus

The parts I liked- This line: "...enchanting and sweet. Delicious swan songs bring me relief." This stanza: "Drink a shot, it surely hits, like a wave of bliss she surely ...

"100 Years of Solitude" by Marquez. Worst book ever written... I'm serious... I hated it, hated reading it, more like trying to force myself to read it. It was just... ...

That was certainly something worth while reading. I felt like I was actually watching a scene of a movie, sorry if that was not in your intentions. The imagery I ...

I liked the imagery, first off, and the theme and subject you were going for. I liked the idea and the context of the poem, as well, and it's intentions. ...

*Claps* I liked this one... I really did. It's probably my most absolute favorite for you. I have nothing bad to say about it. Good job, chap, good job.

Sorry that this is totally off topic, but whenever I see the word insomniac I think of that song, "Fireflies" by Owl City. Because the singer of that is an ...

I will say this was much better than that "Sand" poem of yours I just read... well, partially read. Anyway, I liked the poem up until like the end... because ...

So... because I'm me, I'm going to say that I got bored. I only read up tooo... *Scrolls down* Somewhere on the minuscule line... I have to say, instead of ...

First: Thank you to all for reading the poem and commenting on it. Second: I wrote this on a whim this morning. I actually was on my itouch when I ...

(Yes I know I spelled photography wrong on the Subject, hehe.) So... instead of uploading my pictures to here, because I have too many of them. I would highly appreciate ...

I picked up Twilight before it become such a huge popular thing. And honestly, I still don't hate it. I enjoyed being able to read Twilight, because I like reading. ...

I don't know... if I liked this book. When I had to read it for my English class... we read it together, but "reading" it together meant listening to a ...

The best book I have ever read I have a completely worn out copy of it in my bedroom. I made two friends read it and my Freshman English teacher. ...

I think you could have added more action amongst the dialogue. There was a lot of straight chunks of dialogue that could get confusing. Action is important as well, even ...

You slip right through crinkled fingers...of paper. Paper holds the weight, but how can I trust something torn so easily? Because I'm drawn to let my world revolve around you. ...