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I started reading this becasue I've played the game and thought it might be interesting. Halfway through I stopped because it turned out to be an exact transcription of the ...

Hi there. It's been a while since I did a review, and even longer since I did one for science fiction, but I've decided I love the genre after watching ...

Hi there. I said I'd review this so here I am. I have to admit, my alarm bells went off on the first paragraph. The mistake you make here is ...

Like the idea, but this really isn't the best way to start off. It's a big info dump, and you haven't established a relationship between reader and main character. That ...

As always your writing is wonderful to read. You've also come quite a way in credibility too, becasue I didn't see any of those unrealistic reactions like in the early ...

This was great. I enjoyed it for the most part, but I feel it kind of fell apart after they told him that he had to kill his father. He ...

These books are awesome. I'm one of those fortunate enough to have not read Twilight, although I did suffer Eragon. 1. The Hunger Games series - Suzanne Collins (most unputdownable ...

Wow, now things are heating up. At first when Violet appeared at the scene of the crime I thought she must have killed everyone with her power or something. I ...

Well I've managed to wire up a solar panel just so I can review this (even though it's your fault the power's out) Overall this had an interesting plot, and ...

That's a good idea having the summary of the previous chapters so people can jump in mid story. I haven't read the previous chapters (too lazy :) ) so maybe ...

This one had far less of those pesky believability issues, so well done on that part. You might find some of my points a little picky, but hopefully some of ...

I'm finding this is beggining to drag, because the events aren't exactly reflecting the thing we readers are interested in - the curious marks. Nothing of any significance really happens ...

This chapter introduces an interesting new element. As I understand, the vaccination has caused them to get these strange marks, and to attain various powers. What I'm still unsure of ...

Well, everyone's beat me to it, so I'll just point out 2 things before I get to the second chapter. 1. The girl and him hallucinated, and it seems as ...

Well, as I warned I'm not a poet, so don't take my words for gospel. Now it was a nice subject, refreshingly light, and the rhyming sounded natural, so well ...