Honyflame

Well obviously it has been done many times, who doesn't feel suffocated at least once in their life?? at the time of writing figurative, but before it was written, literal.

wow. you seem to have wrote a part of my past life. you are very talented!!

its sweet, but it feels like there should be more to it.

i really like this, and you are right it is ment to be read aloud. it makes more sense.

Suffocation Stuck in the middle, In the heaving mass. Squashed, everything squeezing. Suffocating in the crush, The life squeezing out of me. Slowly, it is slipping out of my soul. ...