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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Place of Gathering

    Thank you for reinforcing my opinion, LavenderBlue. I will definitely work on making the sentences shorter, and hopefully, much more interesting :).

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Myth of the Panda

    That was really cute, but whenever somebody says something, you have to add commas before the quotation marks. For example, you said "I challenge," but it should be ,"I challenge."

    Jan 28, 2010


You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh