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Awsome. I loved the interactions between the wolf and girl. Found that hilarious! I do think some of the wording could be tweaked, but that's my only complaint!

Thanks for the reveiw!

Nice job. I found it really good. I read right through it without pausing.

Thanks. I'm really bad with titles!

Thank you! I'll take what you said into account.

I enjoyed it. Not much more to say. You have detail, the plot was compelling (if a little sinister) and it was interesting.

Awsome! Loved how you didn't make the Dragon a vicious monster and the princess a damsel in distress.

I really like it! You managed to give us some good details to the characters personality despite the size of the story.