HostofHorus

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Howdy howdy mortal! Thanks for the request, this was a good one! :) I review using: -Make corrections in red -Give suggestions/Questions in purple -Explain the things I like in ...

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Ooo, is Stephen King good? I have heard a lot of good words about him, but I never have read a book of his. What are some of his best?

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Mmm... Complete, that was a fun one. :) Who's next? Get on your knees and beg! (Not really... I just want to review... So come on people!)

Hey there! So I'll stay away from my regular reviewing ways as you asked for characters, structure, and style. So here you are: Characters: This to me was the brightest ...

I echo the Riordan books. He is a great author and I'm sure you will love any of his books! Another one I suggest is The Alex Rider Series, by ...

Still available for assistance... :)

Hmmm, well I can see your reasoning there, and I won't argue against it. I don't believe I have read quite enough of his work to make much comment. All ...

Haha, why is that?

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Hey, the human Host of Horus here to review. Red = Corrections Purple = Suggestions/Questions Random color = Overall Maroon = Likes Out of the corner of my eye, I ...

So apparently you must like my reviews :) Thanks! Maroon = Likes Red = Corrections Purple = Suggestions/Questions Random Color = Overall Your hands are entangled, her fingers sticky, dried ...

Hey Midnight! Don't be scared! No one here is going to get on your for anything, all this is is a place to improve, and believe me, everyone needs to ...