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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wind [Story]

    Izumi I really liked this story. It drew me in wanting to know what would happen next. Only a couple of critiques. “Dear Mikio, I hope you like your room. ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Soul Scheme [Chapter One] Edited*

    Excellent chapter my friend! You described everything so vividly, I love it! All of the minor mistakes have been taken care of in the posts before mine. It draws you ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Hideaway

    Good job Luke! This is a great prologue that really sucks you into it. Makes me want to see more of it and I oh so ever do! The only ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Small Wolf Story I Came up With off the top of my Head.

    OK, for it being short I liked it. The wolves names were also pretty cool too. Spelling and grammar were fine by my standards. But about the prophecy thing, its ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Terror. The prologue.

    OK, I liked this story. A good mystery is something I am always interested in. I saw one mistake that hasn't been mention yet I think. Prologue He had gone… ...

    Jan 31, 2010


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind