IAmthePhoenix

Consider putting this under the "humor" section; this is hilarious. I don't have much to say about your poem. It's simple, short, and sweet. You have a rhyming couplet near ...

Good concept, plot and pacing. I would definitely rank this as an all around good piece. But let me try to get you to that fantastical place that we call ...

This is good. This is very good. The drama isn't drawn out and overdone. The tone is melancholic but not depressive. The imagery is somber and exquisite. I can see ...

This is definitely an intriguing read, mostly because I don't know. That's it. "I don't know" is the appeal of your story. Maybe this is really happening in some fantastical ...

Whoa. That sums up my review. The foreshadowing! The suspense! The action! This was great. My heart was racing through the latter half, and I absolutely loved it. Only a ...

This is a good first chapter to a story, but it can always be better, and I'm going to try my best to get you to that fictitious place called ...