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Re: Pretty Girl
Oh my gosh, that was a beautiful. I try to capture that emotion in my writing but I never truly can. This is one of those poems that you can't ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Looking at the moon
You got to the subject before me you meanie! Oh,well but strange as it sounds it is a lot like what I would have wrote minus the rhyming so I ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: My fly
sorry, to say but it was kinda bad. First of all it does not make sense what so ever and I can tell your trying to rhyme and you are ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: 9/11
I miss spelled person as perso
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: 9/11
When I think back to that horrible day September.11,2001 I don't remember much, but I know many lives were lost It was a beautiful day, the sky was clear and ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Remembering
It's sad and beautiful. I liked it so keep writing!
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Sinking
I like how you express death and the emotions that go along with it. I loved it. Keep writing!
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Sleepy head
The poem is relatable and flowing. Nice job.
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Night
Nice job that poem is beautiful. Keep writing!
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Can't Help It
It was deep and personal. It was perfect.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: In a crowd full of faces
That flowed and inspired. Please don't stop writing.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: I Can Tell When I'm Not Wanted
That was great. Keep writing.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Song of The Seven Seas
This piece of work can be described with one word beautiful.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Thank You and Farewell
That was amazing.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Believe
This piece of work was flowing and perfect. Do the world a favor and keep writing!
Jun 26, 2011