IHI

That was a beautiful poem. I liked how you related your emotions to something else .wish I could do that without it sounding forced ;) LOVE IT.

Oh my gosh, that was a beautiful. I try to capture that emotion in my writing but I never truly can. This is one of those poems that you can't ...

You got to the subject before me you meanie! Oh,well but strange as it sounds it is a lot like what I would have wrote minus the rhyming so I ...

sorry, to say but it was kinda bad. First of all it does not make sense what so ever and I can tell your trying to rhyme and you are ...