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  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    Follow and like, follow and like. That is all I can say. This was truely amazing. You put all the emotions people who are sexually assult or abused experience. The ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: mortally transformed

    I really liked this. The last reviewer told you all the little mistakes I found. Other than those few this was really good! It definately has potential. I really liked ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Story Teller

    I think you shoukd absolutly continue this! I loved the different days of the month, it made me want to read more. The people before me have told you what ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Once a long time ago.

    I didn't find any other errors that leebass did not point out. Woah, that's all I can say to this. This was really good. It made you think and it ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Aren: Guardian Angel

    But have you ever looked at those stars and wondered which one your parents were in the process of destroying at that very moment? I did not understand this sentence. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Vamyre Hunter

    I liked this story excpet there wasn't much to connect to. I liked how the vampire dies at the end :) . I was happy she got her revenge. Everyone ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What we used to be.

    I really liked this piece. I was easy to relate to so it made the connection deeper. It made me want to keep reading and it was easy to understand. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Caller ID

    This piece of work is short but good. The first sentence drew me in wanting to read more. I only found one grammar issue but imagine already pointed it out. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Canola field

    I liked this piece a lot. I found a few minor grammar mistakes and they are easy to find. I liked Jamey's character personally, he just has a vunrebility to ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Journey To A New World

    Hello there Youngwriter, I liked this piece of work a lot. It was interesting and unique which I like. I found only small grammar errors that your reviewers before already ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Yellow Light, White Page

    Weird, this is my FIRST post. In the annoying yellow light of my tiny room, I stared at the white paper spreading do you mean spread before me? before me. ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Light and Darkness

    It start ed at the beginning of time. There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage . His name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Circle of Chairs

    This piece made me want to keep reading. It was creepy yet very interesting. I didn't understand what Mr. Lockhart was doing with those kids and why did they have ...

    Oct 4, 2010


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X