IamFlamingo

Haha, it's reserve, like trying to avoid breathing too much. I can see why it looked like reverse though. lol

Thanks. I didn't think about that that much, because it was sort of just a free write, but I actually agree, the first stanza doesn't really fit with the rest. ...

This is so amazing!! Your words are beautiful and the story and description and everything... I'm sorry, I just don't have words to even say how talented and awesome this ...