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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Better Things: Chapter 26: Ben Again

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicking Time! I’m a little... confused. Did Juno... visit... me? Juno... blind, pretty, smart, funny... love... I remember. Thought I heard... her voice. And some..

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bring me somewhere nice...

    Heeeeey! IamTraunt here to review for my oh so marveloso bud. (Hee hee, see what I did there?) My favourite line: Bring me somewhere nice, When our loved ones never ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hold Steady

    Hey! IamTraunt, your Marvel buddy here. Am I creeping you out? Because, yes, I am reviewing your works. Mwhahahahaha. Ahem. Okay, like Royal said, I can't pick a certain meaning. ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: .

    Haha, the end bit made me laugh: The thing that caught me about the book was the dedication: This book is dedicated to ugly ducklings everywhere./ Don't worry about those ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: People in the park.

    Hey! IamTraunt here! So, I did my research: a humorous, frequently bawdy, verse of three long and two short lines rhyming aabba I find this short, but quote witty. You ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, General Re: Crossroads

    Hey! IamTraunt here to... Talk? Um, comment I guess :-D Okay, this is what my bible says, lets compare shall we: This is what He says: “Stand at the crossroads ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Star Wars Fan-Fic

    Therese... I am IamTraunt... And I am your reviewer! ... Mwhahahahahahaha. Okay, so I'm here to review like I said I would. I am catching you up Nitpicks! He pushed ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Wind Chimes

    Hey, your buddy Traunt here to review - like I said I would . Okay, so its Pokemon Review Day and I haven't used any of the tips that they ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Antagonism & Howitzers & Egomania To Blood

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I love the use of your vocabulary. Its incredible. Antagonism - active hostility or opposition. Egomania - Egomania also known as an obsessive preoccupation with ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The darkness

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I remember I first started here. Just a few corrections: I wasn’t quite sure what was happeningto me. 'Happening' ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: I will publish characters!

    Firstly, it should be 'publishing' and secondly, this is a writing society, not a ranting society. You should really take into consideration that there are young writers on here, some ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: A While Later... (a.k.a. Chapter 2)

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! So, I'm sorry that I haven't read the first chapter, so I may be a little rusty, but I will try my best to understand ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Pixie And The Giant (Part 1)

    Hey, jazzydracula! IamTraunt here to review! Okay... On with the corrections! :D Nitpicking Time! Chrysanthemum let out a sigh, held her breath and dived head first into the puddle. Now, ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Siege, Chapter four: Hunters

    IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicking Time! The stink wasn’t unbearable; it wasn’t even the plain, usual stink of feces, and there were much of it down there, without a doubt. ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Trying: Chapter 3.2

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review, O' Poet Master! Nitpicking Time! They had been done with me. I feel as if something is missing from this sentence. You tell us in ...

    Jul 26, 2014


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong