Iamnotperfect

Hi I like this poem and I think you should live the way it is. It is real and that is what makes it good, sometimes people just write about ...

Hi, I like the imagery that you used in this stanzas: It fills my insides, Turning me black. Like a poison, It bleeds through my veins. My breath is ice, ...

Hi if I have to be honest I feel like there is nothing that distinguishes this poem from all the other ones that talk about love and maybe is because ...

Hi I am not going to correct any grammatical error since all the other people have done so. For it to be your second poem I actually like and I ...

Hi I didn't really have time to red the other comments but I will tell you what I think. I understand the point of the poem but I think you ...

Hola I like this poem and the way it flows, for some reason it reminds me expressions that you would hear from a dramatic movie. I really like the way ...

Hi I like the repetition that I see in the poem I think it kind of gives it a consistency and it expresses a feeling and opinions that many people ...

Hi I really like the way you are rewriting the story and its becoming more interesting and realistic as it goes on. I think that since you mentioned Jacob you ...

Hi I like you poem but there are some points that I can't really grasp e.g. When you say: " are you alive and happy? Somewhere laughing with friends..." Isn't ...

Hi I like this poem especially because there is some points where I can relate to. It looks very genuine to me and as someone might have already said I ...

Hi, I found this poem very straightforward and I can see emotion which is what I always look for in all types of writing. I am sure lots of people ...

Hi this is such a creative poem where did you get all those ideas from ?! :) I would advice you to cut on the and's because there is too ...

Hi there, I like the overall poem. It reminds me of the meomeries of someone's infancy on a nice day out on the beach. It is simple and playful as ...

Hi I really like your imagery and I think there is nothing more poetic than a poem about a rose. I really like the first part however I don't see ...

Hi, I really like the content of your poem and is something that many people would agree with. It is a short poem but most importantly is flawless and with ...