Iamnotperfect

Hi Thank you ... about the "you" at the start it wasn't referring to the author but the actual person, sorry I should have made it clearer. Regarding the detail ...

Thank you ... and yes winter is my favourite season to meditate:)

Hi I really like your poem it's like a breeze of fresh air. To be honest when I started reading the first line I didn't really like it but as ...

Hi I don't really have any criticism, the poem is simple and the idea behind it is good. Keep it up :-)

Hi, thanks for the grammar corrections although I wasn't planning to put any punctuations I just wanted to express the way I felt on the moment, next time I'll make ...

Thanks for the comments :)

I like the flow of the poem, good rhyming scheme and good use of imagery :)

Hi the poem is very well written and I like the way it flows, don't really have anything negative to say ... keep up the good work =)

Hi thanks everyone for the reviews, I tried to make some little improvements on the rhyming hopefully the emotion is still there =)

Hi, thanks everyone for the reviews ... I will definitely put together your suggestions :)

Hi I do agree with some of the things that you said and this is the reason why I made changes to the poem that I would like you to ...

Hi I really enjoyed reading this poem and to be honest I can't really find anything wrong with it. Overall nice work, keep writing ;)

Hi CreativeFreak thanks for the punctuation adjustments they were actually needed and to be honest I was in a rush when I sent it, also I am happy that you ...

Actually now that I think about it how did she end up with Mike?! One of the most annoying characters ... that's strange, hmm I personally would prefer if Bella ...

Hi, I am kind of new at writing poems as well but I like the flow of it , however I think you could always expand your concept more. Keep ...