Idraax

Content moved to first post. See that one for the whole chapter. Thanks!

Thank you very much! That really helps. But looking back at the chapter, where should I add in the description? Should I add it in at the beginning or should ...

I like this.The emotions really come across. It makes me feel sad and I think it would have had a greater impact on me, if it was raining right now. ...

Hello! I'm Idraax and I've been writing for a while now. I found this site through Writer's Digest . Great magazine by the way. I am a freshman in college, ...

(Read the author's note first please) Hello everyone! I'm new here, so please be patient with me. Here is the story I've been working on for a while. I already ...

Your opening chapter is interesting. However, your beginning sounds a little repetitive. Your story flows nicely, although you mention an act(in the first couple of lines I think) and don't ...