Ignatius5453

Oh.... My..... God...... it was great. I read the spoiler afterwards and that made it even more harrowing. I loved it, it was great. I feel sooo bad that you ...

Thanks guys for the glowing reviews. I was proud of this work, glad to see some people liked it!

The first one really conveyed a message, the edited one drew a picture where the the message was erased, it would be cool if you could find a happy medium, ...

Great job! I liked it a lot. I have no bad comments to make, great job. It would be a lot easier to read if you broke it up into ...

So 2 people like absolutely long and boring poems, unless of course theyre not boring. Those two hated the fact that the poem was short and they couldnt write a ...

I absoluteld hated... that there wasnt more. Great job! I have absolutely no complaints. Keep Writing!

Interesting storyline, I'd like to read more, it caught my interest.

I dont usually like this kind of stuff, but I felt the emotion in this poem, I didnt quite feel the chills I get when I read something really good, ...

I liked the chorus a lot, but the first stanza's rhythm was a little off I had to pause between a few syllables, you might want to count those out ...

An interesting way to make a poem, a question and answer type thingy, it was new, and kind of cool. But the subject matter wasnt all that captivating and my ...

I wasnt being contradictive, I appreciate your input. But if youve ever read adventures of tom bombadil, he sounds very much like this, and that was the most recent book ...

We are the same/ something changed A shadow falls, it lights up your face Lovers play recklessly in cold embrace We could not predict or foretell The fires burning, burned ...

Its a little raw, but not all-together bad. With a little practice and some time revising this, it could turn into a solid work. Keep writing!

Im about to beat all of yours. My answer is going to be legen...... wait for it....... dary. *drum roll* Justin Bieber movie, it will not only make you deaf, ...

Why do people hate dumb questions, aren't all questions created equal?