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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Collection of short poems

    Hey, it is ImHero here for a quick review on, I guess all of these fantastic poems! Although often times I didn't see much of a purpose or wasn't astounded ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Falling Sky

    It is ImHero here as requested! I would like to thank you for being the second post on . Now for the review Rhythm/structure: I am glad to do a ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Through Her Eyes (Fantasy and reality)

    Okay so the first two lines you ask about the collision between the UNCERTAINTY of the inevitable approaching night here; “between the uncertainty of the approaching night,” which in a ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Beside You

    It is ImHero here, and maybe I am not the best to review such a piece as I don't listen to music all to much anymore. Although, I will give ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: What Makes Me A Writer

    It is ImHero here going to write a review for you! Please if you have any comments on this critique to post them below or PM me. Okay so, I ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Caffeine

    It is ImHero here completing the obligation of the review above me thread! But I can’t say this was not a pleasure to read. The poem obviously has an original ...

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: A Suicidal Girl

    SO when I look at poetry often derived from pain I look at the personal experience to see if it is real. It does not seem real, it seems like ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Island of Nigh

    Thank you for being my first review on I hope I can help you with this review! Okay! So the first time I read it trying not to be persuaded ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Questions

    So I've done this for a long time and this is by-far the biggest misconception with writers and the rhyme scheme. You let the rhyme scheme take you away to ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the solidarity of fire

    Part 1 - Structure When I was first introduced to you, which was not so long ago I might add, I read a beautifully and eloquently written review about stereotypes. ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Can't We...?

    Welcome! It is judgement day >D. Just kidding it is critique writing day! Why can't we, for just an instant; Be still, quiet and in peace? Firstly, I don't quite ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poem

    Hey! I was just browsing around and seen this! So if you don't mind I will review it to the best of my ability. Yes, I do see that it ...

    Jul 2, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Dramatic Monologue (can't think of a title!)

    Nit Picks “Doss, Floss, Bert”, Mum calls, “picnic time”. punctuation always goes inside the quotation so: “Doss, Floss, Bert,” Mum calls, “picnic time.” Okay to start this review; I al

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Evermore

    Evermore, reminds me of The Raven; is that where you got your inspiration for this? :D So in my reviews I usually start off with structure. Erm, I'm not quite ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: The Worm Goblin

    Hey imhero here to review ! okay so I don't quite know why everyone does this because a line break naturally breaks what you say, much like punctuation, so when ...

    Jun 30, 2013


You are not the voice in your mind, but the one who is aware of it.
— Eckhart Tolle