ImHero

I always forget the imagery! UGH. Thank you for reminding me!

Understood your review, I will try to make an edit to add more emotion but I am utterly confused as to how. Oh well, I like a puzzle :D

I will look into it in a couple of days. I always mix the two up :) I will think some more about the use of punctuation in those lines ...

When I have time I will fix the it by making another stanza or rewriting the whole thing - thanks :D

I like the flow and the writers voice for both of you but why is this not listed as Fan-fiction?

I changed the punctuation, thanks. :)

You don't have to worry about hurting my feelings. I'm a big boy! Thanks for the review :)

Ohhhh, these are shiny :)

It makes me so angry when 4 lines are better then my 6 page poems!! URG. I like almost all of your commentary on writing :)

I have been here for a year but thank you. :)

Oh well, it was more of an experimental poem. Thanks for your feedback.

two Russian Revolutions in three pages?! This is short! :) And defiantly not fun, just a boring old essay so I agree somewhat:)

Love the tone and satire, can't tell you what the poem is about though. :D

I already turned it in :(. I was angry 'cause my teacher just gave me 100% and said it was perfect, although I understand there was many essays. Thanks :). ...

No problem! I will review your other poems if you don't have too many.. SOON. Thanks!