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Persy save some spotlight for the rest of the writers! I'm pretty sure you had another feature's work of art not to long ago:). Talent. Hard work, whatever you call ...

I am hopeful that she will use this review.:) It seems a bit rushed and I forgot to mention that I liked the poem, tell her to keep writing! And ...

No problem. :) I have no doubt that your poetry has improved. If you would like, message me another piece and I will review it as well. Also Have confidence, ...

--Review time-- structure/flow: 4/6 Emotion:2/6 content: 1/6

I wouldn't worry to much about structure. All these reviews tell you a way that art is suppose to be but it doesn't HAVE to be that way. Write freely ...

I agree, I would like to see how much of it relates to the story and other things.

Hey, I know this is late but I thought I would clear up your confusion. Every even stanza is an intercalary stanza; it is a technic used to help broaden ...

I agree with Kit, mostly he has the right idea in my mind. This is just a comment, not a review but I really liked your eloquence. No doubt can ...

Or Mam hahaa, Which ever, :d

Welcome sir!

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Thank you :)

I misused Iambic pentameter, I mean phrase. Sorry its a little late for me and I'm sure I misused some more things :p

Pencil to paper the poem was arguing creationism specifically. "'Cause I am the scientist against creationism"