ImaginaryPoet

Dear Morrigan, This was an interesting poem. I like how you compare the different components of a house to human problems. I did slightly get the feeling like the house ...

Hi Em16, This was a very good poem, and I only have a few comments. First of all, the punctuation was very spread out and in odd places. In my ...

Dear Awru, This is a beautiful and shocking poem. It's very true that everyone gives up something for love, some more than others. I have very few critiques, mostly in ...

Dear Arwu, This is a beautiful poem! I love how you go on a complete journey with the narrator, through their love and joy, all the way to the end ...

Dear Via, WOW! This is an amazing poem, and I really felt the girl's despair and longing for something different. I love the analogy to a bubble filling the room, ...

Dear IamI, This was a very interesting poem. I think I can actually say that I've never seen poetry written in this style. It took a bit, but I believe ...

I really like this story. I think that it may need less adjectives though. For example, “his armored shoes churning up the ground” can be shortened to “his shoes churning ...