In_the_Moonlight

I love the olympics, but my main reason for watching is gymnastics. I just love watching all the people doing flips and ninja moves that you usually only see in ...

okay so far that is my all time fav chapter for needles and roses.

This poem at first struck me as okay , but the ending made it great. The concept I got really changed by the end and I understood what the place ...

BSBM : a couple of things confused me and a few things i loved. *who is Wes you mentioned him in one of your other chapters? *is he a friend ...

Apple and a Graveyard: *the ending was pretty suspenseful *I think Caidan should've asked Hope a bunch more ?s. *detail pefecto *cliff-hanger at the end fit the story next and ...

that was entertaining and suspenseful all at the same time. I can see you writing lots of suspenseful stories in the future.

Haha...once again this was a great chapter. Okay so there was so much I loved about it. *started out slow and gradually picked up speed. *awesome *good description and detail ...

The Review: *entertaining *describing *never once did the story drag it was always a good pace. *great foreshadowing. *charcter description excellent *Tobias is a unique name *overall the BEST! HURRY ...

You had me hooked from the very first sentence. EXCELLENT! I cannot wait to devour the first chapter. :D

By Sun, By Moon : That was very entertaining. *somehow you found a way to make the story both suspenseful and funny at the same time. *I love how you ...

That was intense. Some parts were confusing like why was he writing? Yet again ya leave me wondering whats gonna happen next. A cliff-hanger. I guess that's why I always ...

I'm a huge sucker for poetry and this poem was awesome. *made sense *flowed *interesting topic, which I think basically says everything on certain lines of your poem. *it's really ...

The story: *great beginning *very descriptive *nice names *a few typos *was she mute or deaf? I didn't understand some parts of the story. Otherwise I think this story could ...

This is the most adorable poem and what's great about it is that it states a fact. Stay true to yourself- at least that's the message I got. :D

so far I love all of the stories you've written. No complaints here. Although I will say there is just something about By Sun, By Moon, that sets off something ...