In_the_Moonlight

That was quick, but I am so not complaining. This chapter was just as brilliant as the rest. I think you should have made it a tad longer. I can't ...

Things I liked : *It was really creative and flowed sooo nicely. *It told a story *descriptive *made me laugh, smile, and understand what the character was going through. Things ...

That was so good I'm speechless. Here are the things I liked: *The characters were sooo life like. *The suspense was super intense. *Love how you included a quick kiss ...

this was an awesome chapter. Even though I didn't read the others, I felt like I knew what was going on. You need to keep writing. AWESOME!! :shock: :lol: :D ...

Thanx for all the comments. I realize it isn't the best, but I love it. This is the original version. I've edited it a few times and fixed some parts ...

I wrote this after finishing a book called: Lord of the Nutcrackermen by Iain Lawrence (its realistic when it comes to history with a fantasy twist) Christmas 1914 No other ...

This is one of the stories I started. It not neccessarily my favorite...but when the story gets going later on in the chapters its alot better. Prologue The sun seemed ...

The prologue ended up being a lot longer then I intended. I did not think it was long enough though to break it into to parts though. Please tell me ...

oops sorry! I tend to forget! Thanx for reminding me... :? I'll review my friends work as soon as I come back on, but right now I'm too busy. Thanx ...

Rose From his heart grew a red red rose as deep and passionate as the sea, but as strong as steel. He shared it with her, his lover in which ...