In_the_Moonlight

Things I liked : *It was really creative and flowed sooo nicely. *It told a story *descriptive *made me laugh, smile, and understand what the character was going through. Things ...

That was so good I'm speechless. Here are the things I liked: *The characters were sooo life like. *The suspense was super intense. *Love how you included a quick kiss ...

this was an awesome chapter. Even though I didn't read the others, I felt like I knew what was going on. You need to keep writing. AWESOME!! :shock: :lol: :D ...

I wrote this after finishing a book called: Lord of the Nutcrackermen by Iain Lawrence (its realistic when it comes to history with a fantasy twist) Christmas 1914 No other ...

This is one of the stories I started. It not neccessarily my favorite...but when the story gets going later on in the chapters its alot better. Prologue The sun seemed ...

The prologue ended up being a lot longer then I intended. I did not think it was long enough though to break it into to parts though. Please tell me ...