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Hi, I am here to give a review. The starting of the story was quite interesting although the first paragraph was quite long. You could have made it into two ...

Hi, The starting of the story was very interesting and it was a quite fun story to read. In the story around the end you said they were walking but ...

Hi, I am here to give a review. The beginning of the story was quite heart touching, especially the way you portray Timmy understanding of alcoholism. I didn't understand the ...

Hi, First, the starting was quite good, I could feel River's frustration and anger. I thought it would be like the scenes from movies but it was quite different and ...

Hi, I am here to give a review. You started the story in a very interesting way. I loved the suspense at the beginning. You described Gwin and Lucy very ...

Hi, I am here to give a review. The story is very confusing at the beginning but I also felt the suspense. The suspense of the story made me read ...

Hi! I am here to give a review. First, I really enjoyed reading the story, the humor of the story made me laugh. The information were perfectly written, it was ...