Incandescence

Gal, I clearly outlined that above. Qi, you may have reached your intention -- I'm sure you did. Attention doesn't make something art -- Gwen Stefani is not a work ...

This may be poetry, but it certainly isn't art, nor does it have artistic merit. It is the standard, normative rants of everyone -- ultimately, it conforms. To conform for ...

"The image is more important than the plot..." -Jean Baudrillard

Overdone.

Jack Kerouack...:dreamily stares off:

You have to 'experience Texas' for it to make much sense.

I didn't have any feelings from reading it. It struck me as a dead, lifeless poem.

Circular...much too circular. Overall, a pretty trite subject-matter, and nothing really sonorizes the piece. Thumbs down, though I often feel the first three lines.

Curiously, the ending of this made me chortle uncontrollably.

We share sympathies.

Yes, I am.

Is this too short, too sympathetic, or just bad all around? I can't decide. Nick's picture is on my blog.

It was a go at Toril Moi and Judith Butler.

The Used, The Mars Volta, Fall Out Boy, The Early November, and The Juliana Theory.

Of course it is. This was a poem for my Media and Philosophy course, in which I combined modern 'teenage' lyrics.