IncohesiveScribbles

Hello floatingvoice, This is a wonderful short story, but not in the sense of the word wonderful. It's scary, suspenseful, horrible, and all too real. It's sad that some people ...

Hi XPresidentTurtlesX, This a really beautiful piece, (The poem and the music). I can tell you really loved playing this piece by the amount of well written poetry that went ...

Hello, Mysterium, I do like this story and it does have potential but there is always room for improvement. The beginning part is confusing to me. Why did you have ...

Hello Panda11, I do enjoy this story, it has good substance but like kevin25a said it has numerous problems with spelling and grammar. One thing I noticed was when you ...

Hi JSS394, This sounds like a great story, but like the other two comments said it's far to long for a proper review. There are quite a few run on ...

Hello lakegirls, This is a beautiful poem. It is very powerful and I'm glad this isn't based off real events but there are real events all to similar to this ...

Hey jamesrae123, I like this story a lot. It has the right amount of suspense and progression. You have good substance to your writing but some of the dialogue is ...

Hello Cirute, This is a great short story! I can't wait to find out what happens to Ren and Kaev next. This is a good start to what you said ...

Hello MaheenYasmeen22, This is a wonderful compilation of all the good things to do in a college interview. Even though this is specifically geared for college I'm sure this goes ...

Hey Despondence, This is a very interesting start to your story, I like it. It has the perfect amount of vagueness that is perfect for a prologue but it still ...

Hi eray20, I love this story! It is captivating and intriguing, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I liked how you italicized mother. It gave it almost ...

Hello Kyle Rumbold, I'm not really sure how I feel about this story. I am kind of confused as to the point, (lack of conflict, rising action, turning point, and ...

Hello Fizz, This is a very powerful piece of work. I can say that I have never been depressed, so this makes it easy to forget what some people are ...

A review for Team Sassy Ladybugs-- This is a sickeningly lovely story. It's twisted yet refined in a regal manner that I can't describe. Just from this work I can ...

Review for Team Sassy Ladybugs- This is a great poem. I can tell you really tell you love the person you wrote this for. It's not only quirky and filled ...