Inked

Thank you this poem is a work in progress and will change periodically. Thank you for your feed back, ~ Inked. :)

Thank you I appreciate your feed back, and I have taken what you have said into consideration as you can see. ~Inked:)

You left words out so reread it and you can probably make the corrections yourself without me having to point them out. I font know if your planning to add ...

I agree with the punctuation comment, I believe that you could do with some imagery, and it doesn't hurt to put yourself in the story, feel the story. Make it ...

I'm sorry if this poem doesn't make sense I tried really hard to make it work.