IntergratedSystem

Thank you for the comment, I'm not very punctual when I'm writing but I get my point across enough I think, and any constructive criticism is much appreciated. :)

Thank you, i'm quite new to the whole posting my stuff, so im thankfull for any criticism or tips :)

I lay awake while the worlds asleep , no soothing liquid no pill to take my vision dulled by orange light the streets alive with screams and fights the silent ...

The soldier boy that lays in bed, deathly still but not dead his filthy clothes and blooded face, A constant reminder of the War torn place with hands once still ...