Irrlichtchen

Thanks a lot for the detailed review! I will definitely go through all your suggestions tomorrow and will rewrite this scene. This is definitely really helpful and I hope I ...

Thank you! And thanks for pointing out that typo and the comma. I will change it tomorrow And the ending: He is furious and agry at her, but he thanks ...

I agree with you on that. I think reading makes us wiser, because we can experience all the different situations through a character and see the outcome/consequences of their actions. ...

Thanks!! This comment really made my day, I am still smiling like crazy :D

Thank you! I've fixed the mistakes you mentioned, thanks for pointing them out.