IveGotMyWords

Hey thank you for the critique! Yeah I don't know. I have asperger's but I can think clearly. It's not really the same as autism spectrum, there are just some ...

Yeah, like I said I got that Leonard Cohenesque filled-with-despair-and-unwilling-to-do-anything-about-it-because-i'm-a-slave-to-love kind of thing going on (that was a long word). Thank you for your

Yeah, I'm more of a lyrics person, I don't really do punctuation enough :P I can fix that up right now. I wasn't really thinking of it too much! Thank ...

Yeah, thanks LilyMoore! This was kind of just a quick outpouring of emotion and I sometimes fail to realize when I do that I don't explain who I am or ...

Thanks for the comments, Amy, Silented, and Kamas! Kamas: I understand the cliche of the poem, but when I write it's usually spur of the moment. I am currently having ...

Yeah, I'll fix the tenses in the morning. The only tense change was supposed to be past in the prologue and present in everything else. Thank you :] And yeah, ...

I'm glad you made it past the prologue :P After this chapter I feel like my writing style starts to develop more. Right here I'm still kind of struggling... Chapter ...