IvoryRose

Dang it stanza didn't separate! Oh well sorry about that......

I have no idea why my review was submitted twice. O.o

Woop woop I returned and I will probably review all three chapters. First off I love the first paragraph. You described sounds and the chase well. It really painted a ...

Oh my god thank you for the format tips. I feel like a derp whenever I try to type up poems! Thanks for your feedback!

Thank you for your feedback,glad you liked it!

Thank you for the feedback and tips. Trying to experiment with different styles,so this is very beneficial. I have been interested in vampires,since I first saw Marceline debut in the ...

Thank you. To be honest I'm still figuring out how to type up in the format I want. I'm a recent member to YWS,so figuring stuff out. I love your ...

Oh I thought it said 2017,I got confused. ;.; Thank you!

Hi there snowmonkey9! This is the first piece I read from you and I really like it! I love the message and find it relatable. Keep writing, you have talent. ...

Thank you!

Thank you for the review and you don%u2019t have to thank me you%u2019re really talented! :)

Yes, wise and noble Potato Lord!

Oh, hope your cat feels better.

Idk what happened in my reply.

Thank you for the review! The punctuation was there on purpose to signal a pause, so it seems like it%u2019s leading to something serious. However, it leads to nothing. Also, ...