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Re: When The Light Burns
I think I get the outline of what it means, but it is hard to explain. That is really beautiful. I thought I was a poet, but my poems are ...
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: The last thing I was really good at
Wow. Kind of hard to understand, but still really good. I really don't know what to say, or how you could improve. Nice job.
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself
Oh. Wow. That's not morbid at all*sarcasm* That is kind of ... Creepy. For once I am speechless. Wow. I really like it though. A few suggestions: 1:Why do people ...
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: O Fortuna!
That is a really good story! Just a few things: 1: Saying "Then I will smell with all my heart" is a little bit over the top. You might want ...
Nov 23, 2012