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this was really good. i'm kinda confused because i wrote on this before but i don't think i posted it because for some reason it's not on here. I wrote ...

This poem is really interesting. The most important part of the poem that it couldn't live without is 'So that means you can only be but a figment of my ...

This poem was good. who were you writing to ... it seemed as if you were really in a war with someone... i know exactlly how you feel. The peom ...

No... OK first of all it is not stupid. I can't even begin to tell you how many times i just sit up at night and think of what to ...

This poem shows a lot of love and thinking on the narrator's part. My favorite part was when you said that the love was there and that you'd tried to ...

I really did like this poem. i believe you really captured the essence of childhood in a short sentence. I love the part where you say "Before iPods,cell phones and ...

Oh my god! i loved it... but i must admit i felt totally stupid the first ( no really the second and third time) time i read it. I had ...

oh my god i absolutely loved this poem. My favorite part is when you say that someone will get hurt and that theirs no avoiding it. That is the harxdest ...

This story is the most touching one i have read today. (and trust me there were plenty) This is true because there are so many cases when girls fall in ...

This story was... nice. I almost cried at the end. I swear that i did. you did good in explaining the feelings of both characters. I just don't get one ...

I loved this story. I did have a few thoughts though. I feel like it was too soon for you to tell us that her brother died. It was good ...