JC

French, because of the dormir part. Bread and Crackers? What do you mean by that?

Obviously candy. -JC

Suggestions- Keep writing, and the perfect title will come to you =D

Fayth- it's because there are so many people who love him so much, for reasons I don't quite understand.

Put. hehe. Just sat it out loud, kinda stacatto. Put.

I love how when somebody even just mentions Eragon/Paolini we all just jump at it =D It's so amazing. As for the series, I never made it past the first ...

Hey Kimmy! I'm JC =D Out of curiosity, what kind of lyrics do you write? Any specific genre? Well, welcome to the site, and good luck with your book. I'll ...

I'm sorry I don't have much advice, as it's all been taken care of by Kitty. I think the whoa-oh-ah's can be taken out though, because they aren't exactly lyrics, ...

That is pretty awesome. I also write lyrics, so I'll be sure to check out yours =D What kind of sign language did you learn? I was unaware that there ...

Life stories are amazing when done well =D Welcome to the site! I'm sorry, I forgot to bring a gift *blushes*, but I hope you will accept this... *Critique for ...

Ah, a fellow dis-liker of the education system. My favorite quote by Mark Twain is, "I never let my schooling get in the way of my education." You've done a ...

Hey Lauren, welcome! I'm sure you'll find this site quite satisfying, and I hope that you continue to come! What kind of stuff do you write/read? Feel free to PM ...

I love the idea for this, because I know that music does affect the way I write, and I do listen to different kinds of music for whatever mood I'm ...

I'll agree with Chocoholic in that you captured the emotion very well. I didn't like the chunkiness of it though, with the blocks of writing. I think you could incorporate ...

Please. Please. Please. PLEASEEEE!" For exagerations, it looks a lot cleaner to be simple and just use italics. That and you don't need to add the extra E's at the ...