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Hmmm...Chill out, nobody's gonna code...I like it =D lol Anyways, thanks for pointing out all the repeats! I forgot to read it over before posting *bad JC!* and I'll be ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 38 -Code The hospital loomed over Jamie. It’s white and beige paint was beginning to chip, and the giant red cross was chipping. There were ...

Ah yes! I'm going to expand on what razorblade said, (I was supposed to put it in mine, but I forgot :O) The fun thing about third person is that ...

rolling it up and down and doodlling on a piece of paper she had ripped out of her diary. You can improve the flow of this by replacing the 'and' ...

10/10 Gotta love Twilight. =D

4/10 -Makes no sense to me...

Wow...I wish I had been that talented when I was 11...Great work! -JC

The fishes are beautiful. You're right, that one is better. I think the second one has such a blurry background, and the flower is so oddly shaped that it becomes ...

yeah...all I see is a white box with a red x...

:!: Sorry about the long wait on this one! :!: Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 37 -Lost in Time and Space All the lights in the house were on, it ...

The first one is amazing. Beautiful. Breathtaking. You get the picture. (no pun intended). But what's with the four pink spots? Those kind-of tripped me out. The second one just ...

Take the lighting from the first one, and the angle of the second one and it's very good. But seperate like this, neither one really catches my fancy. Good job ...

"Evie," she said just as quietly. Just as quietly as what? You don't mention volume at any point before hand, so scratch it here. Jackie, a scrawny little girl that ...

10/10 For some reason I love all of your avatars. They're just so...real. I guess would be the word. =D

6/10 I like the first one, It made me laugh in a weird way. But the second one doesn't do much for me.